Once upon a time there were three girls working in a salon. But one didn't look very happy because she wanted to brush Emma June's hair first.
Iris brushed Emma June's hair for a long time.
But then Iris put red hair curlers in her hair.
And then she paid the money at Iris's table.
Then Emma June went to the library and got a book.
And then she paid for her book.
And then she waved goodbye.
Interesting premise, but I found the characters a bit derivative of Raymond Carver's early work.
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